Report Card Comments

 

1	Language: Picture book story  mark	Language: Picture book story Comment	S.S poster mark	S.S poster comments
2	3/4	Her story has good structure, it has a clear opening, middle and end.   The story has a good flow.  She can use more juicy words to improve her writing in the future.	Absent
3	2.5/4	Isaac created a short story based on a picture book. He created a good story with a clear opening and exciting main body of the story. However, his writing is lacking a solid ending and his grammar and spelling need to be carefully edited to achieve a higher mark. In the future, Michael should work on making a complete story and edit his work thoroughly.	4/4	Isaac and William put lots of effort in making their poster.  He explore different aspect of Peru, his research include capital city of Peru, local culture, famous landmark and local food of Peru. He also created a booklet to further introduce the country.   He provided lots of visual to support his poster.
4	3/4	His story has good structure, it has a clear opening, middle, and end.   The story has a good flow.  He can use more juicy words to improve her writing in the future. He can also add more details in his story to improve the quality of the story.	3/4	His research on Peru included the capital city of Peru, local culture, famous landmark and local food of Peru. He also included fun facts of Peru to make the poster more engaging. He can improve his work by adding more visual to support his information.
5	2.5/4	Callum worked very hard in making his story. He wrote a story of a young boy finding a fossil by the lake. His story has a good organization, with clear opening and ending. He wrote his story in mostly simple sentences. He can improve his writing in adding more details in the main body parts of the story. He can also try to use more juicy words to enhance his writing.	3/4	His research on Peru included capital city of Peru, local culture, famous landmark and local food of Peru. He also included fun facts of Peru to make the poster more engaging. He can improve his work by adding more visual to support his information.
6	4/4	Kayci showed great effort in creating her own stories. She used juicy words in her writing, and she also use great organization in planning her stories. Her stories are very innovative and engaging. In the future, Kayci can add some conversation in her story to make it more appealing.	4/4	Kayci created a big project, she created a presentation poster which included all four countries that we are studying. Her research on four countries are very informative, and she also provided lots of visual to support her work.
7		Didn’t receive her work	4/4	Chelsey’s work on creating a poster on India is very impressive.  She did lots of research on the country, her research include local animals, local culture, language use in the country and different culture practice in the country.  She also provide great visual on the poster, making is very fun to read.  She worked with Kiana and Kalia on this poster.
8	3/4	Her story has good structure, it has a clear opening, middle and end.   The story has a good flow.  She can add more details, such as a description of the setting or conversation between charcters to her writing, as her story is concise.	3/4	Her research on Peru included capital city of Peru, local culture, famous landmark and local food of Peru. She also included fun facts of Peru to make the poster more engaging. She can improve his work by adding more visual to support his information.
9	2/4	He didn’t write a lot in his story.  The story did not have a clear structure and there was no clear ending.  He also didn’t use any juicy word in his writing.	3/4	Michael worked with Lucas in creating a poster about India. His comprehensive on India includes its highest mountain, local culture, food, animal and some fun facts of the country. He can improve his poster by improving his organization of the poster.
10	2.5/4	Isabella wrote a great story about a little girl. She added some creative elements in her story. However, her writing is lacking some structure as it is missing a clear middle and end. Isabella can improve her writing by adding some juicy words and using proper sentence structure.	2.5/4	Isabella required lots of assistance and encouragement to start her research. Her poster on Peru introduced local animals, local food and famous landmarks of the country. She can improve her work by including more information on her research.
11	2/4	Neo used his own book as reference for his story. His theme of the story is Minecraft. Neo used a lot of juicy words to support his writing. However, his writing is lacking consistency and structure. His book did not have a clear storyline and is lacking story structure.	3/4	His research on Peru included capital city of Peru, local culture, famous landmark and local food of Peru. He also included fun facts of Peru to make the poster more engaging. He can improve his work by adding more visual to support his information.
12	3/4	Seth took a very creative approach in planning his story. He worked very hard in writing his story. His story has a lot of funny elements and he also used a lot of illustration in his work. He used lots of details to describe his story. In the future, Seth can improve his writing by adding more juicy words in his writing.	3/4	Seth required lots of assistance and determination to stay on task during his research. He researched about India and his poster introduced different culture in India, including its famous animals, food and culture practice. He can improve his work by adding more visual to support his information.
13	4/4	Rachel’s story is very fun to read, the story is very engaging.  She used lots of detail description to support her writing.  The use of conversation between characters also made the story very fun to read.	4/4	Rachel  did lots of research on Peru, her research include local animals, local culture, language use in the country and different culture practice in the country.  She also provide great visual on the poster, making is very fun to read.
14	2.5/4	Kaland used his own book as reference for his story. His theme of the story is Minecraft. He used a lot of juicy words to support his writing. However, his writing is lacking consistency and structure. His writing did not have a clear storyline and is lacking story structure.	3/4	His research on Peru included the capital city of Peru, local culture, famous landmark, and local food of Peru. He also included fun facts of Peru to make the poster more engaging. He can improve his work by adding more visual to support his information.
15	4/4	Ernest is a very strong writer. His work is very creative and it has a great story structure.  The use of detail description also made the story very fun to read.  He created some very unique characters.	3/4	His research on Peru included capital city of Peru, local culture, famous landmark and local food of Peru. He also included fun facts of Peru to make the poster more engaging. He can improve his work by adding more visual to support his information.
16		Didn’t receive his work.	3/4	His research on Peru included capital city of Peru, local culture, famous landmark and local food of Peru. He also included fun facts of Peru to make the poster more engaging. He can improve his work by adding more visual to support his information.
	3/4	His work is very creative and it has a great story structure.  The use of detail description also made the story very fun to read. Gordon can improve his writing by adding more juicy words in his writing.	Absent
17	Absent	Did not receive his work	3/4	Lucas worked with Michael in creating a poster about India. His comprehensive on India includes its highest mountain, local culture, food, animal and some fun facts of the country. He can improve his poster by improving his organization of the poster.
18	3/4	Ethan took a very creative approach in planning his story. He worked very hard in writing his story. His story has a lot of funny elements and he also used a lot of illustration in his work. He used lots of details to describe his story. In the future, Ethan can improve his writing by adding more juicy words in his book.	3/4	Ethan required lots of assistance and determination to stay on task during his research. He researched about India and his poster introduced different culture in India, including its famous animals, food and culture practice. He can improve his work by adding more visual to support his information.
19	4/4	Kalia Showed great effort in creating her own story. She used juicy words in her writing, and she also use great organization in planning her stories. The use of conversation in the story also made the story more interesting to read.	4/4	Kalia’s work on creating a poster on India is very impressive.  She did lots of research on the country, her research include local animals, local culture, language use in the country and different culture practice in the country.  She also provide great visual on the poster, making is very fun to read.  She worked with Kiana and Kalia on this poster.
20	Absent		4/4	Isaac and William put lots of effort in making their poster.  He explore different aspect of Peru, his research include capital city of Peru, local culture, famous landmark and local food of Peru. He also created a booklet to further introduce the country.   He provided lots of visual to support his poster.
21	4/4	Kiana is a very strong writer.  She is very creative, and she showed lots of passion in creating her story. She used juicy words in her writing, and she also use great organization in planning her stories. Her description of different characters and the setting of the story also made the story very engaging.	4/4	Kiana’s work on creating a poster on India is imposing.  She did lots of research on the country, her research include local animals, local culture, language use in the country and different culture practice in the country.  She also provide great visual on the poster, making is very fun to read.  She worked with Chelsey and Kalia on this poster.
22	2.5/4	Alexander wrote a story about a bird and a fish.His story has a good organization, with clear opening and ending. He wrote his story in mostly simple sentences. He can improve his writing in adding more details in the main body parts of the story. He can also try to use more juicy words to enhance his writing.	2/4	During the group project, Alexander didn’t participate in the process of poster making. He also didn’t help their group mates when help is needed.